Gathering of ideas or planning for the ‘methods’ to engage the audience:
1 flashback
2 voiceover
3 Dialogue
4 establishing
5 make up
6 props
7 music
8 lighting
9 syudolihs
10 sound effect
Ordering of ideas - what are the best 4?
1 flashback 2
2 music 3
3 syudolihs 1
4 lighting 4
Synonyms for engaging:
Introduction
Catch ‘em: Avilden’s film the power of one is a life changing film that everyone should watch
Thesis: the director uses many methods to engage the people who watching
List of points/statements: symbolism flashback music lighting
1S many objects are used as symbols such as
E the ostrich bracelet
X It represent love as it was pass down from been given pk dad to his mother and then from pk . to Manria
X the Dictator did this to show the strong love between pk and manria.
X this combines well with the dialog i'll come back to get you this show love .
Y similarly the notebook the symbol of the notebook true love between the two main characters
2S not only was symboil a method used to engage the audience but flashback was too.
E when p.k got knock down by gidoon Duma he had a flashback to the elephant when he was younger.
X this make us understand that pk needed encourage and hope to get back up and this was a captivating method
X that audience and t rewind us of his past
X this combined well with the sound effects of the elephant charging which made it a terrific scene.
Y this can be juxtaposed to the flashback of simba with the stampeding animals
3S symboli flashback and music were fan tastic methods used to inters the audience
E that the start of the film we hear Native African music and
X this helps show that film is based in south Africa
X the purpose of this is to help get a better feeling for the
X landscape and combines extremely well with establishing shots of the scenery
Y this links to end of the film where pk and Duma run off across the African terrain with the film closing similarly to how it stand
Conclusion: Avilden used symbol flashback and music brill in his film
Restate thesis:
Restate list of points:
Punch line: this an extent rem engage film that is a must watch for everyone
I liked how you used symbols to and explained where and what they were in the movie.
ReplyDeletei now understand what the symbols and camera shots they used in the movie.
next time maybe you could give more evidence and more descriptive words